Great Concept, Terrible Execution
To begin the concept is amazing. The thought of yourself in a dark romance? Yes please!
I had high hopes despite the use of AI. I should have stopped there. Unfortunately in a moment of weakness I made the order. I filled out the form according to their suggestions. Then I selected the book that is 200+ pages and received a free "From His Eyes" short as well.
I did receive the order before the 48 hours was up. When I first looked at the length I saw it was only 184 pages. Little annoying considering i paid for 200+. I started reading and tbh its very clearly AI. At page 16 my e-reader showed the pages as blank. I then emailed the company and got a reply within 24 hours. They said they were sorry for me not being able to read it and said they resent it and to use the text file rather than the pdf.
They also said that the "From His Eyes" part was included in the 200+ page count. Then dismissed why someone would be upset about it.
When I did open the text file on my e-reader, it showed it was only 124 pages now. So unsure if it was the formatting or they cut out some of the story.
Then they offered me a 50% off my next book. Which to be honest is a little insulting and I will not be using it.
I have since then emailed them again, but no response as of yet. (Its been less than 12 hours)
Overall the story is boring and mostly unreadable due to exact sentences being repeated, incoherent sentences, and even a character who randomly appeared and was treated as if I had been introduced to them and had not. I'm not even half way into yet and unsure if I can even finish it.








